Under the sun_page 1

sooo, still haven´t given u p on making a comic!*_* gave it another try with my new tablet an all, but changed the main char/horse..have issues with the story and writing all in all but would just like some feedback on it so far, good/bad?
sould I make the comic or just a series of pictures? was planning on using a lot of referens photos to be able to make it faster and actually finish it...I thought it would be a good way to promote some awsome stock photo deviants, and if u got a nice pose or found one and linked it I could also link u as a thank u in the comment^_^?? so, comment! what do u think?? am I just a lazyass who should make all horseys on my own or what?^_^

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